I jumped out of the car because I love the beach. I ran to the sandy beach when I see a giant foot print. Standing beside it, I say to myself, “Is that a footprint?” As the sunset down I started to get bored of it. I ran so fast as a cheetah chasing a small antelope to get a picture. I ran so fast back to the footprint. Then the sun dived down. Do you think I should go near it? I ran home as fast as a lion.
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Tuesday, July 3, 2018
the dadwarers footprint
I jumped out of the car because I love the beach. I ran to the sandy beach when I see a giant foot print. Standing beside it, I say to myself, “Is that a footprint?” As the sunset down I started to get bored of it. I ran so fast as a cheetah chasing a small antelope to get a picture. I ran so fast back to the footprint. Then the sun dived down. Do you think I should go near it? I ran home as fast as a lion.
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